Monday 16 October 2017

Election writing: I would mach for Labour

WALT: Write an effective argument for our chosen political party.


Let's do this, have you heard that before? I think that Labour has the best policies for health.
I am going to show you what polices that i would vote for: Ending HIV, Funding mobile devices for students and Building a new hospital in Dunedin.


First policy i will explain is to aim to end HIV in NZ by 2025.


Labour plan to end HIV in New Zealand by 2025 by getting better health care, why?
So that New Zealand can be a healthy country and so that it can get rid of the disease and maybe other disease too.


Labour has another good policy about funding mobile devices for students.


Labour also wanted to fund mobile divides to students at school, so people like families and students don't have to buy their own devices because they might not have enough money.


As well as funding devices for students labour also wants to build a new hospital  in dunedin.


Labour really wants to build a new hospital in dunedin, the hospital might need to be broken or its just that dunedin needs another hospital, the hospital that they have probably doesn't have enough room for people.


In my next paragraph i will be talking about the policy that i disagree with from another party.


National wants to allow DHBs to fluoridate drinking water, don’t know what Fluoridate is its in toothpaste and apparently helps with cavities, well NEWS FLASH it doesn't its also not good for our bodies.


In this i have been showing you what policies i would vote for and i think that labour has the best health policies.


I think that labour is the best party to vote for. Why? they have the best policies in health. Today i have talked about: Ending HIV in nz, Funding mobile devices for students and Building a new hospital in Dunedin.

Let's do this, but can we really?

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